For those of you who don’t know me, I’m Tess MacKall, moderator at Avoid Writer’s Hell (pssst…I also write). So what do I do as moderator? Mainly stare at the computer screen and scream at everyone to trim their posts. Nah…not really. What I do is pretty cool, actually.
I think of exercises for the group to participate in, trying my best to make them as interactive as possible. What kind of exercises? Anything from punctuation and grammar to word usage and point of view issues. We work on sexual tension, mood, characterization, etc. You name it, and we’ve touched on just about every facet of writing possible.
Recently, we started having contests. Our first one entailed flash fiction. Group members were given a prompt and wrote a five-hundred-word story. Our winner was Carol Percer. Nita Wick took second place, and Blake Devereaux rounded it out with third. Many thanks to those who worked so very hard on their stories.
Right now we are accepting five-hundred-word excerpts for editing. Michelle Ellis, Editor Extraordinaire, will receive excerpts from me with no name listed. She’ll edit the members “blind”. Catch the double entendre there? She won’t know who the members are and at the same time will catch every error she can find. This exercise is designed to give authors the feel for what an agent might think when they read your work. She’ll give feedback that will be genuine, but firm—no holds barred.
This coming weekend a new contest will be begin. Best First Page. We’ll be looking for first line hooks as well as usual editing issues, and whether that first page can hold a reader’s interest. Prizes will be awarded.
In addition to all the exercises and contests, daily discussions take place on everything from publishers and editors to agents and cover art. The last two days have explored our author’s feelings on forced seduction in romance. And that discussion branched out into injecting realism in our stories. If there is a publishing issue out there, we’ve got the hot button covered.
So what is our mission? Regardless of what you write, erotic or non-erotic. Suspense or paranormal. Contemporary or historical. Psychological or legal thrillers. Whether you are bound for print or prefer the world of e publishing, we’re here to help. And what do we expect in return? To see you BLOW ‘EM OUT OF THE WATER!
Many thanks to Faith for allowing me to be a part of such a wonderful group. And thanks to my bud, fellow author and AWH Puppy, Lex Valentine, for helping us out with this brand new blog. Lex is a damn fine writer and you can find her work at Pink Petal Books.
And finally, thanks to all the AWH Puppies for making the learning experience fun!
Come join us. Http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Avoid_Writer’s_Hell





Great blog! D’oh I gotta send in my five hundred for the edit me blind.
I am so proud to admit I haven’t been whacked lately. That must mean somethings are sinking in lol!
~Hales
You, m’dear, are doing incredibly well. It’s a pleasure to watch your writing grow.
AWH is fun and very interactive. I didn’t realize how much until you listed it. lol. Gosh you stay busy…and so do we. Thank you Tess MacKall, for taking the time!
(((hugs)))
You are most certainly welcome, Lisa. I’m just happy to be doing something that actually helps my fellow authors. May be taking some time off soon to do some writing that keeps getting placed on the back burner, but I’ll be back. lol Me and Ahhhhnold. lol
Hmm…I’m gonna have to turn my cyber newspaper in for a newer, more modern version. Oh! I know! I’ll borrow Lady Muse’s bullwhip! LMAO!
CRACK!
Gotta keep them puppies in line and writing, writing, writing!
They’ve already accused me of using a cattle prod. lol
Awww. Thank you, Tess. MUAH!
You’re most certainly welcome, Lex. The kudos are damn well-deserved.
Great post, Tess! I am so glad I joined this group.
And I second Hales DOH! Must send my 500 in.
We’re glad you joined, Shiela. And please do send me that edit.
Great post Tess.
Janice~
Thank you, Janice. Enjoyed your blurb for Windswept Shores on Tuesday.
Great post to get things rolling! I’m looking forward to getting more involved…again.
So good to hear from you, Kara. Please, do come back around. We miss you.
Still don’t know why we’re called puppies, but the group is worth the confusion! lol