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		<title>Comment on What kind of story works for me&#8230;. by Janice Seagraves</title>
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		<dc:creator>Janice Seagraves</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 23:18:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Very good explanation.  I feel like I understand now.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very good explanation.  I feel like I understand now.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What kind of story works for me&#8230;. by Jaime Samms</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jaime Samms</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 16:39:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, I&#039;ve never been accused of having the best reasoning skills. :) I go on gut a lot of the time, and if a story gets me in the gut, then I&#039;m much more likely to give it a good review than if it was just technically proficient but not gripping, even if it has some mechanical issues.

After having given writing a more important place in my awareness, after having gone through the editing process with a number of very good editors, and, on aoocation, some less good ones, I&#039;ve found it more difficult to ignore the technical flaws (as I see them, because rules aside, some of it, like head hopping can be quite a bit about personal taste), just because I know more now than I did then.

And you&#039;re absolutly right; quite often, the really good storytellers already have instinctively good writing skills, too. I guess, for me, there&#039;s a soul to a really good story that you can&#039;t get just by lining up all the elements and following all the rules.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I&#8217;ve never been accused of having the best reasoning skills. <img src='http://authorsalacart.com/awh/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I go on gut a lot of the time, and if a story gets me in the gut, then I&#8217;m much more likely to give it a good review than if it was just technically proficient but not gripping, even if it has some mechanical issues.</p>
<p>After having given writing a more important place in my awareness, after having gone through the editing process with a number of very good editors, and, on aoocation, some less good ones, I&#8217;ve found it more difficult to ignore the technical flaws (as I see them, because rules aside, some of it, like head hopping can be quite a bit about personal taste), just because I know more now than I did then.</p>
<p>And you&#8217;re absolutly right; quite often, the really good storytellers already have instinctively good writing skills, too. I guess, for me, there&#8217;s a soul to a really good story that you can&#8217;t get just by lining up all the elements and following all the rules.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What kind of story works for me&#8230;. by Josh Lanyon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Josh Lanyon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 14:20:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting insight, Jaime. I&#039;m not sure I agree with your reasoning, though. *g*

Here&#039;s why -- and I say this as someone who teaches writing, does a lot of manuscript evaluations, and is probably one of the harshest critics within our genre (which is why I don&#039;t review). If a writer can make me forget technical flaws with her storytelling, then she is one hell of a storyteller -- and in the end that&#039;s all that really matters. Everything else is just...the trappings. The heart of storytelling is to pull a reader into the story. To make the world and the characters come alive. Very few writers can do this for me, so I figure anyone who &lt;i&gt;can&lt;/i&gt; is doing something that surpasses mechanics or whatever the current writing trends are (head-hopping for example).

I don&#039;t think there&#039;s ever been a dichotomy for me between the skill of a writer and how much I&#039;ve enjoyed that writer&#039;s work. Most of the time -- for me, at least -- a truly skilled storyteller &lt;i&gt;is&lt;/i&gt; a truly skilled writer. There are a couple of exceptions -- I won&#039;t name them -- who I think are technically mediocre lame but they tell such a gripping or entertaining story, I have to give them credit. Anyone who can get me to lay down that critical red pencil and just enjoy the story (enough to put these writers on my auto-buy list) is performing some potent magic and should -- in my opinion -- be scored accordingly.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting insight, Jaime. I&#8217;m not sure I agree with your reasoning, though. *g*</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s why &#8212; and I say this as someone who teaches writing, does a lot of manuscript evaluations, and is probably one of the harshest critics within our genre (which is why I don&#8217;t review). If a writer can make me forget technical flaws with her storytelling, then she is one hell of a storyteller &#8212; and in the end that&#8217;s all that really matters. Everything else is just&#8230;the trappings. The heart of storytelling is to pull a reader into the story. To make the world and the characters come alive. Very few writers can do this for me, so I figure anyone who <i>can</i> is doing something that surpasses mechanics or whatever the current writing trends are (head-hopping for example).</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think there&#8217;s ever been a dichotomy for me between the skill of a writer and how much I&#8217;ve enjoyed that writer&#8217;s work. Most of the time &#8212; for me, at least &#8212; a truly skilled storyteller <i>is</i> a truly skilled writer. There are a couple of exceptions &#8212; I won&#8217;t name them &#8212; who I think are technically mediocre lame but they tell such a gripping or entertaining story, I have to give them credit. Anyone who can get me to lay down that critical red pencil and just enjoy the story (enough to put these writers on my auto-buy list) is performing some potent magic and should &#8212; in my opinion &#8212; be scored accordingly.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What kind of story works for me&#8230;. by Jaime Samms</title>
		<link>http://authorsalacart.com/awh/2010/07/21/what-kind-of-story-works-for-me/comment-page-1/#comment-319</link>
		<dc:creator>Jaime Samms</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 14:03:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I always say I review as a reader, but really, it&#039;s impossible to shut the inner editor up completely, unless there&#039;s nothing for her to nit pick, and how often does that really happen? There&#039;s always going to be a little something.

Still, I have realized I much prefer to be entertained emotionally that awed technically, I think.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I always say I review as a reader, but really, it&#8217;s impossible to shut the inner editor up completely, unless there&#8217;s nothing for her to nit pick, and how often does that really happen? There&#8217;s always going to be a little something.</p>
<p>Still, I have realized I much prefer to be entertained emotionally that awed technically, I think.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What kind of story works for me&#8230;. by Faith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Faith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 13:09:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good morning, Jaime! This is a topic that myself and several of my good friends and colleagues have discussed to death and scratched our heads about until we have bald spots, lolol. Fiction is subjective and so are reviews. I&#039;m like you, however. When I used to review books, I considered the same things you mention in your blog post.

Good post, hon!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good morning, Jaime! This is a topic that myself and several of my good friends and colleagues have discussed to death and scratched our heads about until we have bald spots, lolol. Fiction is subjective and so are reviews. I&#8217;m like you, however. When I used to review books, I considered the same things you mention in your blog post.</p>
<p>Good post, hon!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Necessary Changes to AWH by Faith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Faith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 12:32:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Kissa! It&#039;s so nice to find you here this morning! Also, your kind words are very uplifting. Thank you for your support, hon, and thank you for your friendship too. I hope to see you here from time to time as lessons and such are posted.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Kissa! It&#8217;s so nice to find you here this morning! Also, your kind words are very uplifting. Thank you for your support, hon, and thank you for your friendship too. I hope to see you here from time to time as lessons and such are posted.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Necessary Changes to AWH by Kissa Starling</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kissa Starling</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 13:27:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve loved you since the day I saw your name online. You are a wonderful writer and should be focusing on writing and your family. Family is key. (I didn&#039;t know you were expecting a grandchild, that is awesome! congrats!)

Anyways, I have sent several authors to AWH to gain tons of knowledge and I will continue to send them to AWH chatters. Maybe since everything is on the blog I can keep up better!

I am so happy that your writing career is growing by leaps and bounds every single day!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve loved you since the day I saw your name online. You are a wonderful writer and should be focusing on writing and your family. Family is key. (I didn&#8217;t know you were expecting a grandchild, that is awesome! congrats!)</p>
<p>Anyways, I have sent several authors to AWH to gain tons of knowledge and I will continue to send them to AWH chatters. Maybe since everything is on the blog I can keep up better!</p>
<p>I am so happy that your writing career is growing by leaps and bounds every single day!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Necessary Changes to AWH by Faith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Faith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2010 02:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Darn dial-up! I&#039;d replied to this early this morn and it never appeared. Thanks for your comments and understanding, ladies.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Darn dial-up! I&#8217;d replied to this early this morn and it never appeared. Thanks for your comments and understanding, ladies.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Necessary Changes to AWH by Kayelle Allen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kayelle Allen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Jun 2010 20:57:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m a big lurker, but I do pay attention. I wish you the best and know you will be happy with this decision once things kick in for you. Kudos on knowing when to say enough is enough. Congratulations on all you have accomplished.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a big lurker, but I do pay attention. I wish you the best and know you will be happy with this decision once things kick in for you. Kudos on knowing when to say enough is enough. Congratulations on all you have accomplished.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Necessary Changes to AWH by Sapphire Phelan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sapphire Phelan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Jun 2010 12:47:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I understand wholeheartedly. Congratulations on the contracts. Thanks for all you do.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I understand wholeheartedly. Congratulations on the contracts. Thanks for all you do.</p>
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